I am a Year 6 student at Glen Taylor School
For this task we had to write about creating atmosphere.We done our planning then we made a short story.
Kia Ora Mokoia.I love your story.Could you change “We done our planning” to “We had to do our planing before we start our story”? Great job!
Kia Ora Mokoia.
ReplyDeleteI love your story.
Could you change “We done our planning” to “We had to do our planing before we start our story”? Great job!