Hi Mokoia, I Loved your poem because how you explain what life is now and then in the world right now. How would you feel like if you were compare to someone?
Thank you Zion for that amazing information. This task didn't take me long at all, I decided to think of what I was going to write down and then down it. I think very hard when it comes to working.
I loved the way you have written this poem. You have deep meanings in this poem which makes you an amazing person. I am looking forward to see more of your blog posts. Have a terrific day!
Hi Mokoia,
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem you have composed. I had tears in my eyes and a smile on my face as I finished reading it. Well done Mokoia. Ka Pai!
Hi Mokoia, I Loved your poem because how you explain what life is now and then in the world right now. How would you feel like if you were compare to someone?
ReplyDeleteBey Mokoia and keep up the good work.
Hi Mokoia
ReplyDeleteI really love your poem because it has a lot of meaning in it and it makes a serious mood and atmosphere.
Questions:
How long did this take you?
How did you make up such meaningful sentences?
How come you used the joker for the background at the start?
Bye Mokoia
Thank you Zion for that amazing information. This task didn't take me long at all, I decided to think of what I was going to write down and then down it. I think very hard when it comes to working.
DeleteKia Ora Mokoia,
ReplyDeleteI loved the way you have written this poem. You have deep meanings in this poem which makes you an amazing person. I am looking forward to see more of your blog posts. Have a terrific day!